Today I am combing Poetry 101 Rehab: Home with H in A – Z April Blogging Challenge. My two choices this week are:
Acrostic
Home is more than bricks and mortar
Opening doors to many
Memories, mistakes and special moments
Especially keeping us safe and secure
Enjambment
My home is my castle, it
reflects my personality and
doesn’t fit a mould.
There are certain things always
travelling with me wherever I
make my new home.
http://maraeastern.com/2015/04/06/poetry-101-rehab-home/
#A-Z Challenge
I love your double takes on the prompts 🙂 It’s clear that you know what you are doing – and you do it well!
I am only a beginner so I am honoured that you like my work. I go back into the Poetry course side if I need inspiration for a different style.
I absolutely agrre with Mara 🙂 You are doing really good with chosen words to match with your feelings and thoughts. It seems just so easy for you to find the perfectly right wording.
Although I have one hint/suggestion.
My personal feeling and the way I adapt to your lines while reading made me consider that maybe you could rethink the second and third line in your acrostic? I am just trying to say that for my personal feeling of your writing it seems to make more sense like this:
“Opening doors to many memories, |
Mistakes and special moments”
It appears more fluent to me and the “memories” could receive more attention…
Just a thought as I said
Stay writing and sharing with us please 🙂
Thanks for your feedback. I am new to writing poetry and am happy to consider new ideas. Glad you liked it.